The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts elucidate how many people under 30 and over 30 years age groups are doing different activities by themselves.
Overall, it can be manifested that the highest proportion of age groups people do achievement at work and make them most happy. However, they are the least spend time with their family and traveling.
Firstly, the highest 31percent of under 30s people do achieve at work and they make happy. Also, they are 22 percent interested in doing their hobbies
Moreover, the least percentage of having a good appearance and traveling. which is18 and 15 percent respectively. and other factors accounted for 14 percent.
Secondly, the highest 32 percent of over 30 people are interested in achievement at the workplace and they make feel happy. whereas the least number of people interested in doing hobbies and financial security. which is 24percent for the former one and one-fifth for the latter one. Lastly, they are less spend time with their family it is only 14percent and a mere 10percent for other factors to do over 30s people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98314606742 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60299153935 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5354052369 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6363636364 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116646038129 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467848306396 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627244238131 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760316190511 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539031865399 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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