A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Soumya,
Hope this letter finds you in a good health.I remember, last month(June) you had a Wedding to attend in Rajasthan and you borrowed a big suitcase from me.I believe you must have had a great time there.I am writing this letter to remind you that I need that suitcase.
It was a blue colour suitcase with a digital number lock and has 2 compartments with four medium pockets inside.There is a name "Raymond" written over it and having a strong handle.Till now, I didn't have a problem as a bag is in safe hands, but I need it now on urgent basis.
I am travelling to Singapore next week for 10 days on official trip.That is the reason I am asking for that bag.Such kind of a bag is indeed a blessing for a long duration and distance.
As per our last conversation,you told me that your cousin is coming to my city after 2 days.So can you please send that bag along with him? It will be a great help.
I am sure you will understand and do the needful at earliest.
Best Regards,
Sheela
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Soumya, Hope this letter finds you in a good hea...
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Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... this letter finds you in a good health.I remember, last monthJune you had a Wedd...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...and you borrowed a big suitcase from me.I believe you must have had a great time ...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ve you must have had a great time there.I am writing this letter to remind you th...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve you must have had a great time there.I am writing this letter to remind you th...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...rtments with four medium pockets inside.There is a name 'Raymond' written o...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Till
...tten over it and having a strong handle.Till now, I didnt have a problem as a bag is...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... and having a strong handle.Till now, I didnt have a problem as a bag is in safe hand...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
... next week for 10 days on official trip.That is the reason I am asking for that bag....
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Such
... is the reason I am asking for that bag.Such kind of a bag is indeed a blessing for ...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...he reason I am asking for that bag.Such kind of a bag is indeed a blessing for a long dur...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
... distance. As per our last conversation,you told me that your cousin is coming to m...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ousin is coming to my city after 2 days.So can you please send that bag along with...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the needful at earliest. Best Regards, Sheela
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, kind of, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3829787234 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80397360804 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.17077815 44.8134815571 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164574686422 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625112135935 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067809033586 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872395230764 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066841318426 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.