Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Living in an era full of competition, it is not uncommon to say that young generations need to go through a lot of uneasy things to pursue their dreams, hence suffer more than the former generations. In my opinion, however, I firmly believe that each generation has its own trouble to bear with.
Starting with those lived during the period that wars were the greatest concern. Having lived in this period, teenagers could not have a peaceful time to enjoy their childhood, but they would feel afraid of losing their families, houses, or even be assigned to join the army once reaching a certain age. An illustration of this point would be the Second World War, in which thousands of Jewish people, including children, had to live in fear of a massacre day by day. Thus, it is visible that previous generations' teenagers had the misery that youngsters nowadays can not comprehend.
Shifting to modern teens, whose main challenge is their career path. It is no doubt that teenagers would willingly dedicate all their youth to follow their dreams due to their ambition. In this regard, it would be a burden that could drain all their energy and leave only anxiety consequently. To demonstrate this point, my sister who wanted to apply to a famous university realized that she had depression and had to put off the entrance exam one year later as a result. Hence, young generations nowadays would often have more anxiety about their future than any other generations.
To sum up, no generation would trump any other one in any terms, despite the torment that they need to undergo. Each of them has their own tension to endure with, but I hope that no matter what the situation would be, young generations can have the courage to achieve their goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, thus, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78547854785 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51590806179 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6724898748 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201225950383 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721144772241 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474866223927 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126542787551 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417126127873 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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