Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The important decisions of the society should be made carefully. Some people think young people is not able to determine the important decisions. However, I claim that young people could have enormous influence on the decision of society. There are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the technologies advanced quickly nowadays, everyone could get lots of different information from their cellphone and internet. Young people are more familiar with these novel skills, which provide them to have other access to influence the important decisions of the society. For example, in Taiwan, young people's main
source to get involve in society is internet. There are varies ways to cause the huge debate on the internet, such as posts on social media, launch a survey or even open an channel on Youtube. The power of the internet is effective then one think. Five years ago, young people in my country kept fighting for the same sex marriage to become legal. Lots of supporters posts on Facebook to indicate their perspective to same sex marriage which influence elder's concepts. At last, young generation acquired the attention from the government and launched the vote for all citizens to decide whether the same sex marriage is legal. Through the internet, Taiwan became the first country that pass the same sex marriage in Asia.
Secondly, young people has more chances to participate in the society and politics. Several decades ago, even the woman can not join in the politics, not to
mention the young people. However, there are more and more candidates who is only thirty years old. For example, there is a youngest president who had just
defeated the older candidate in the campaign and won the election in my country's history. After he became the president, he keeps listening to the voice of the
young generation which often be overlook before. He not only believes that young people could bring the changes for our country and able to determine the future of society, but also encourage young people to fight for their own right and prestige in the society. By doing so, young generation became braver to provide their concept and views to the whole society. After this reformation, the policies could also be influence by the young.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the young people could had significant influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society. Not only because
the technologies is more advanced and convenient, but also the tendency of young people to participate in policy and concern about the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07424593968 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53048765424 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482598607889 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9391459697 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0869565217 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7391304348 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238839866314 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773893565733 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695080816514 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113991659917 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910427212784 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.