There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, most people use to listen to music for relaxation. there is a myriad type of music like Classical music, Flock music, Rock music, Pop music and international music, etc. In recent days people have heard Rock music everywhere, hence most people preferred international music. I firmly believe that people are more listen to international music instead of classical music, I will explain the why people more usually listen to Rock music.
In a couple of days, people are less interested in traditional culture and classical music. Hence, They don't know about classical music. The young generation mostly chooses to learn the easy way. And, It's very tough to understand and learn classical music, Therefore, day by day we lose traditional music.
On the other hand, many people work in an English environment, so they understand easily international music. Thus, They have interested in rock and international music. The musical team mostly favored making a song which is people mostly like. so that, Many composers make an international song. and people are very excited to listen to every new song. however, we can use it to listen to international music.
Overall the young people don't know about classical music and preferred to listen to international music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, therefore, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22330097087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78608637908 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8157193852 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7333333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456727898388 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194686327004 0.084324248473 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126776826438 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314672730108 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090649589978 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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