Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
What is your view? Discuss.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern times, children are likely to be vulnerable to some diseases that were found in adults only. One of the some popular diseases is obesity. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and suggest several possible solutions to this problem.
There are many factors which lead to obesity. To begin with, the development of technology contributes to the production of a variety of attractive video games. These games appeal to children and disturb them from their concentration on study. More specific, children spends too much time on standing in front of the computer's screen and joining violent competitions through unreal characters on the Internet. As a result, they become less active and lose interests in extracurricular activities and outdoor sports, which are necessary for burning calories and keeping fit. In addition, more and more companies produce various kinds of fast foods and junk drinks that contain a lot of fat. Consequently, these kinds of foods are attributed to overweight conditions and if children eat too much, they can become sensible to be out of control their weight.
There are a number of possible solutions to help tackle this problem. Firstly, government should puts heavy taxes on factories which are responsible for producing and advertising fast foods and junk drinks. Simultaneously, government should invest in building modern gym facilities and sporty parks to raise awareness of citizens about the importance of doing regularly exercises. Besides, parents also have responsibility for encouraging their children to work out and take part in active activities with friends instead of staying at home and putting their noses on the computers. Additionally, parents should control their diets and provide them with proper nutrition on each meal.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to obesity and steps need to be taken by the cooperation between government and family to address this serious issue.
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35691318328 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83339409974 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0077693846 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151654118724 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467329675676 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541299134094 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888283969536 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415715384403 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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