Topic: Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is two side argrument that hosting study has more successful than self learning.But other and I mostly support hosting study because while studying with other ,they may tell you the differences and your mistake.
For self learning there many factor of affect for people to lke.self learning bring huge amount of idea for people to make beacause when studying with group they often sum up the idea to make the final conclusion,but while study alone you can bring up your own idea and make it without any comment or criticize.furthermore is studying alone can also help you gain more ability such as ability to collect imformation,training your patient ability and finally is to faster the brainstorming the solution to solve problems.
But the way to the future at the seminor meeting they also needed the ability to contact with other people so hosting study also affected the future,as well as the way the treat other to ingratiated them.Some of the student self learning for a long time and then suddenly form a fear to facing with people .nevetheless hosting study help student to recognize who’s smart so they can involve with them for selfdevelopment.hosting study very diversity so they can will recive lot of professional feedback to enchancing there own skill for later.
In conclusion I belive hosting is very needed for future in application as same as event.the way presented to each other will be more flexible and more sensitive
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... has more successful than self learning.But other and I mostly support hosting stud...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... study because while studying with other ,they may tell you the differences and yo...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you the differences and your mistake. For self learning there many factor of a...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many factors'.
Suggestion: many factors
...ur mistake. For self learning there many factor of affect for people to lke.self learni...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... For self learning there many factor of affect for people to lke.self learning bring huge ...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bring'
Suggestion: to bring
... affect for people to lke.self learning bring huge amount of idea for people to make ...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...up the idea to make the final conclusion,but while study alone you can bring up your...
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Suggestion: , training
...y such as ability to collect imformation,training your patient ability and finally is to ...
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...orming the solution to solve problems. But the way to the future at the seminor...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...o hosting study also affected the future,as well as the way the treat other to ingr...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...way the treat other to ingratiated them.Some of the student self learning for a long...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...way the treat other to ingratiated them.Some of the student self learning for a long time a...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ddenly form a fear to facing with people .nevetheless hosting study help student t...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
... of professional feedback to enchancing there own skill for later. In conclusion I beliv...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be more flexible and more sensitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01652892562 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06870143359 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.113221621 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.5 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314699478837 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189079703798 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445244916739 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189079703798 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445244916739 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 13.0946893788 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.