As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a concern that many minority languages may disappear. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.
What is your view of this practice?
Through global integration, English, Spanish, and Mandarin have become popular as languages of international communication. However, this also creates anxiety in the extinction of minority languages by dominant groups. It is so significant that countries should preserve the national language to maintain their cultures and contribution to linguistic values.
Firstly, every country attempts to preserve the language to maintain its national culture. Language is one of the significant elements in which people can convey their own culture. Some countries have typical traditions and their language also represents those uniquenesses, therefore it is difficult to change or replace their first language with more dominant ones. Especially, some regions of a country have a distinctive culture which they are afraid to lose because of various customs or differences of history. For example, people do not speak Mandarin in some parts of China because they want to preserve their ancient culture.
Next, because every language has its own value, people have strived for protecting their own language. Firstly, unexpectedly sometimes the international language cannot help people to completely verbalize meanings of content that their own language can indicate transparently. Moreover, many people lose their confidence in the expression of emotion if they speak a second language. Secondly, through the language humans can explore the values of ancient history which just exist in particular nations. For instance, Hebrew is the pride for Israelis because it is an ancient language that was written in original Christian Bibble.
In conclusion, some countries attempt to preserve their minority languages occupying by dominant groups unless they do not want to lose their cultures. This effort not only can help to protect their cultures but also contribute their linguistic values to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94587859425 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.333248945 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267409407933 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106091803141 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543056977353 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188606487004 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435223103041 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.