As languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a concern that many minority languages may disappear. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.
What is your view of this practice?
Through global integration, English, Spanish, and Mandarin have become popular as languages of international communication. However, this also creates anxiety in the extinction of minority languages by dominant groups. It is so significant that countries should preserve the national language to maintain their cultures and contribution to linguistic values.
Firstly, every country attempts to preserve the language to maintain its national culture. Language is one of the significant elements in which people can convey their own culture. Some countries have typical traditions and their language also represents those uniquenesses, therefore it is difficult to change or replace their first language with more dominant ones. Especially, some regions of a country have a distinctive culture which they are afraid to lose because of various customs or differences of history. For example, people do not speak Mandarin in some parts of China because they want to preserve their ancient culture.
Next, Because every language has its own value, people have strived for protecting their own language. Firstly, unexpectedly sometimes the international language cannot help people to completely verbalize meanings of content that their own language can indicate transparently. Moreover, many people lose their confidence in the expression of emotion if they speak a second language. Secondly, through the language humans can explore the values of ancient history which just exist in particular nations. For instance, Hebrew is the pride for Israelis because it is an ancient language that was written in original Christian Bibble.
In conclusion, some countries attempt to preserve their minority languages occupying by dominant groups unless they do not want to lose their cultures. This effort not only can help to protect their cultures but also contribute their linguistic values to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70070422535 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87158843411 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3888867145 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281296229445 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111415141859 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623838299119 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20050921871 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682528320583 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.