The idea of offering employees sabbatical time has become quite fashionable recently, with some
major companies believing it has great benefits. However, there is also substantial opposition to the concept,
and we will discuss the two views now.
People have different views about offering sabbatical time in order to increase the efficiency of workers. While some think that this can lead to negative development, I support those who believe that this phenomenon can be quite profitable for the employer and the employee.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of taking a vacation from work. First of all, during the vacation, individuals move away from work, consequently, they lose or forget some of their skills; therefore, after returning to work, a person less effective. Furthermore, the second problem is time loss. In other wards unpaid sabbatical will not help those who adore their work too much, due to the fact that for those who enjoy working, work is relaxation. For instance, Elon Musk has never taken a vacation, so he is the richest man in the world.
On the flip side, in order to work efficiently rest is vital. Firstly, a good rest contributes to recovery, and a refreshed and energetic person works with full dedication. To clarify, due to a busy schedule, people get tired and do not become unable to perform even a minor work, hence, they need some time off to refresh themselves. A second point in favour is that such leave will help to schedule work and personal life. To simplify, the time given for relaxation, workers can spend on planning and organizing work and their own life, as a result, the work capacity may increase. As an example, those employees who are doing well in their personal life are mostly the best employees.
In conclusion, it seems true that the advantages of sabbatical leave do indeed outweigh the potential disadvantages. However, there are undeniable negative sides of this facility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73447026596 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2479453807 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104609416837 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357107345761 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312804670734 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659454241702 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374477667221 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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