Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an
unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try
and improve such situations.
It is often argued by people whether to try to improve situation such as unsatisfactory jobs or, accept the situation and move on. In my opinion, it is better to accept the fact to overcome the poor condition with and then, try to extend the boundaries.
A number of people may try to extend their boundaries and love to take risks to mitigate the extreme bad conditions such as earning less amount of money or unhappiness with the current work and so on. Despite the fact, that leaving the job and attaining new job may manifest less assurance, some people are optimistic for a bright future. For instance, If a person decides to leave a job percentage of unemployment is negligible, on the contrary, the percentage getting plethora of opportunities might be more. Hence, it is often misunderstood that the percentage of taking risk is 50-50.
Moreover, some people may think twice before taking a new step and thus, believe in the acceptance of poor condition. For example, in the game of cricket, instead of getting out, a less confident batsman might get maximum of 2 points if he strikes within the field. However, it might be difficult for a person to take extreme decisions about life and might believe that this is a phase of life and it will change
after a certain amount of days.
Thus, before going for a new job or acquiring different path to earn money, examination of the situation is substantial. In my belief, enhancing the knowledge in a particular field might open a door for new opportunities and ultimately, conditions might change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks mitigating'.
Suggestion: risks mitigating
...xtend their boundaries and love to take risks to mitigate the extreme bad conditions such as earn...
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Line 8, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n money, examination of the situation is substantial. In my belief, enhancing the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.843866171 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83680879546 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2249325987 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259923535865 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101683429355 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132629255493 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137420423855 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141578517989 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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