TPO Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In this modern era, it is necessary that everyone should work according to the system of the country for the betterment of life otherwise it will be arduous to live peacefully. It is important because if people won't arrange themselves in a good way and do not have ability to plan things can never be successful. I agree with the statement that young people should be teach how to take your life on a smooth path. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, with the increasing technology and time life has taken a complete turn from simple to complex. The life of young people should be organize or it can be a destroyed. For example, when I was in school, at that age I was so careless and do not work with responsibility as I grow up and entered in high school and two years later my all friends graduated and I failed. In addition, I realize that I have to plan about my future and I started to do things in a pattern and now I am a pharmacist. Thus, this example elucidates that, working in a organized manner always worth it.
Second, young generation must have the ability to decide or to take sudden decisions some times. It is necessary because this age is the peak of the life. If, bad decision were taken there is always a guilt inside and remains till you die. For instance, the I always wanted to be a lawyer but when I passed out from school I thought that law would be my major but unfortunately my sister, cousins of same age were taking science as a major and told me that there is scope of medical and have growth in it. They easily changed my mind and I took science as main course because I do not have power to plan for my future. Therefore, this example elucidates that to make life easier it is essential for children to plan about future.
To wrap up, modern life is not as complex as it looks if you have ability to plan and organize things what is happening in life it is way much easy than the old life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: taught
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Message: Did you mean 'organized'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28459530026 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44221229121 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498694516971 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1768496975 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5625 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335857310291 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107368326871 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591796063466 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214025582184 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474807017601 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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