In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People have different views about owning a home or renting one. Personally, it may be true that owning a home would make our lives having a sense of belonging, but there is some concern we must not overlook.
There are two main causes why I disagree that owning a home is more significant for individuals. Firstly, the house which renting by ourselves also could be our home. In my opinion, the house that I rent can be a special refuge for myself. I can design the room and let it become my ideal look. After my decoration, it also can make me foster the belonging in my home.
Secondly, the practical aspect of the difficulty of buying a house in this day is the high prices of real estate. In the developed country, like Taiwan, people’s salary is much lower than the home loan they should pay every month. If I buy a house in 30 years old, I will need to pay the loan for about 20 to 30 years. In that case, I can’t spend too much money to improve the quality of life, such as traveling around the world, buying some luxuries, or eating more better.
In conclusion, I believe that owning a home is not the major goal for people’s lives. Due to the soaring property prices, home loan could be the biggest pressure of the working class. In order to owning a home, we may have a finance-dependent lives.
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... is some concern we must not overlook. There are two main causes why I disagree...
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...ke me foster the belonging in my home. Secondly, the practical aspect of the di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38524590164 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49447117748 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6833630308 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4285714286 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24627196178 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084740128524 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533534185161 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143127279849 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297227351077 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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