Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the trend toward female education has been totally changed. A section of society thought that males and females do not have any kind of discrimination based on gender. That's why universities need to allocate fifty per cent seats for females. I partially agree with this statement and I think for some subjects this idea is good but other subjects admissions are based on their qualification. In the course of the essay, I will argue my point of view.
First of all, there are professions that are equally in demand which cover both gender problems. In most countries, people are not discussing their problems with the opposite gender. In these subjects, universities should need to reserve half of the admission for girls although they have their basic education requirements. For instance, In the medical field have a number of situations where the opposite gender does not feel comfortable discussing their personal health issues. In addition, the same situation happens in the judiciary their women better pursue other women trials rather than men. Some occupations need a good qualification.
Secondly. a lot of jobs demand well educated and experienced people, so in that subjects, universities give admission on their qualification rather than reservation. Government and parents need to put light on those areas which are weak in boys and girls and they get their admission on merit. For example, an engineer who came from that process of reservation and they design a thing that will be used by many people, if it will not work properly and got an accident then who is responsible.
In conclusion, In some subjects where human lives are not involved there, universities reserve half of the admission for women while in those subjects where human lives are involved their admission are based on merit in universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...kind of discrimination based on gender. Thats why universities need to allocate fifty...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...eed a good qualification. Secondly. a lot of jobs demand well educated and ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12913907285 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81586452484 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.670789306 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110822562666 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353638958988 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365143322405 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693228377037 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467328801048 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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