Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In the future, it is predicted that the number of elderly people will overtake that of young people in many countries. For example, Japan has already seen an overwhelming number of people aging above 60. In my opinion, this is likely to be a negative trend and I will explain my belief in this essay.
To begin with, the lack of workforce would be a serious issue that countries with old population have to face. In this era, there are many industries, such as mining, that require a tremendous number of workers. In addition, these jobs tend to demand physical fitness, as well as long working hours, which are mostly suitable to young workers only. As a result, a decrease in the rate of young age group would hinder the development of the important industries, consequently damaging the economic expansion of the whole nation.
Furthermore, an old population can also cause financial problems to the government. This is because the government have to increase their spending on social welfare, which pays retired workers their pensions. Moreover, the costs of disease treatment and health care also arises along with the rise of the percentage of elderly citizens. Except for some countries which have already had large economy, most countries would not be able to address these expenses.
Lastly, it is widely believed that this trend seems to be irreversible. Many families could be reluctant to have many children since they have to take care of old parents, which is rather time-consuming. Consequently, the proportion of young people is likely to keep falling over the years, worsening the problem.
All in all, it can be seen that the country’s economic growth will probably suffer if the percentage of younger people drops. Thus, I hold a firm belief that it would be a negative development that a country has more elderly people than young adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to deal'.
Suggestion: to deal
...or a long period, people have struggled dealing with the depletion of oil or coal, whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, in contrast, in short, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10001102569 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1804575732 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267037918499 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920783055687 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067082906086 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172680184613 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687291224198 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.