Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sustainable development is a difficult task to most countries. While a number of people say that it is impossible for a country to both thrive successfully and keep the environment unpolluted, I would argue that this target can be achieved if there are some suitable measures.
On the one hand, many people who claim that sustainable development is impossible base their opinion on the fact that to become economically successful, most countries have gone through the process of industrialization. This means that they have exploited their finite natural resources such as coal and oil to run their factories, polluted the air with harmful emissions and contaminated water supplies with hazardous waste. Besides, deforestation will become more widespread and battery farming makes agriculture unsustainable. These human activities not only pollutes the surrounding environment but also contributes to global warming, threatening human’s health and the survival of plant and animal species. For these reasons, many people believe environmental problems have become a full-blown crisis and that no conservation actions can help.
On the other hand, there are still measures that can be taken to tackle this problem, which means that a developing economy and an unpolluted environment can co-exist. For instance, alternative resources such as solar power or wind energy can substitute fossil fuels to produce energy and generate electricity without creating pollution. Governments can invest more in treatment systems so that the emissions and waste that are released contains less toxic substances. They should also place a ban on environment-polluting activities and fine heavy anyone who associates with these behaviours as a deterrent. At the same time, more campaigns and environmental programs can be launched to raise public awareness of this issue.
To conclude, to maintain a thriving economy and a clean environment is an achievable target. However, nations should make great efforts and previse decisions or else the consequences will be unimaginable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63141025641 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23587654662 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63141025641 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2824624078 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194144192864 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562880944328 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722781981065 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122045150478 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074017674416 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.