Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Now a day, we are living in modern era and every second is very important to us. We are connecting to each other by social media. So here, internet play a pivotal role and we cannot repudiate it. People are having a hard time reaching a consensus whether government should more money on internet access than road construction. A lot of folks hold conflicting views. As far as I am concerned, I believe that the authority ought to invest more money on internet. There are many reasons that support my points of view and I will explore it in the following essay.
To begin with, we are passing pandemic situation and most of the institutes have been sine die for a long time. Consequently, pupils are now depriving from their education and engage themselves in sharp practice. As a fact of that, a number of students have been cut off at the beginning of the primary stage. It is true that social media can be utilized as an alternative to teach them. For that, We require a good internet connection by which government can reach every student without any risk. For example, In Bangladesh, the corono virus is rising day by day and the government has been closed all institution for prolong time. They are providing online base education but the worse matter that all plans are ended in smoke due to poor internet connection. It is obvious that the author should have spend enough money to full fill the demand.
The second reason comes to mind that we can not go a single day without internet. First of all, we need to communicate the other person who stay a far cry from us. The second thing is that we do our business activities through mobile bank. The third reason is that we get our every new from social media. As a result, if we want to complete above task, we need better internet. However, it is only possible if the government take necessary steps.
Given the factors outline, I may reach conclusion that it is more practical to invest money on internet access.
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- TPO 36 integrated writing 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es in sharp practice. As a fact of that, a number of students have been cut off a...
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Line 2, column 805, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... is obvious that the author should have spend enough money to full fill the demand. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, as a result, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58192090395 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52515829189 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9340037991 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167209541958 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462545017396 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437953724407 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111117608236 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408928969554 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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