In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is controversial in many nations that whether a minority of people who can make lucrative incomes should be considered as a beneficial factor for a country or some limitation of salaries earned by individuals should be imposed by authorities. Although both views possess a certain degree of accuracy, I lean towards the latter idea since it helps decrease the disproportion between wealthy and ordinary people in our society
On the one hand, a nation's economy can be profitable by those people who earn immensely high salaries, as they can not only support their country finance-wise but also improve the general living standard of its residents. In fact, people making a lot of money means that the percentage they invest more in their country's projects or buildings is escalating. Thus, they gradually become a backbone of their country's economy as well as create a greater scale of job opportunities for their people, improving the inhabitants' lives
On the other hand, the giant distance between well-off individuals and the remaining people in a nation can potentially generate a dramatic aggressive movement among its citizens. Specifically, as some people become increasingly wealthier, others have fewer chances to make a breakthrough in their life. Therefore, people who are already rich will become richer and vice versa, people who live on a budget will find themselves more trouble to live, motivating them to oppose their politics or launch national protests, which absolutely devastating for a country. As a result, governments should enact powerful restrictions about salaries that can be earned by each individual in order to narrow down the imbalance between rich and poor people and soften the frustration of the lower class, all in all remaining the stability and peace in their country
To conclude, it is true that there are some excellent people who can earn a giant amount of money for a living. Although many people assume they as an advantageous element for their country, I strongly endorse the idea that government should draw a line to limit the salaries earned by individuals in a certain level
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...le in our society On the one hand, a nations economy can be profitable by those peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17630057803 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88611420147 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.715984931 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.875 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.25 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.125 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27946448404 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137955494466 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597301204517 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193856820498 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527073663702 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.0946893788 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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