University education should be free for all students.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, education is a vital part of society. Everyone around the world needs universal education to increase their life and contribute to change the world. However, free education for all students is not really reasonable so I strongly disagree with this statement.
Firstly, in my opinion, the government should only reduce or free tuition fees for poor or remote area students to minimize illiteracy. Because children in those areas have rough lives so few children who can access education. The government needs to care about these cases to guarantee that all children go to school. Besides, the poor children are often so intelligent and hard, so the government should do that to discover talents.
Secondly, if they are free for all students, maybe for some students from poor families, they can catch opportunities to study hard and change their life. However, for the students from wealthier families, they will feel that education is not really necessary and important so they do not need to try. Going to school without money will not be able to bind them to have responsibility for their study. Furthermore, free university education should not. Because some people will feel that studying at university is very easy and they go to school just for fun or imitate their friends and they don't know what they really need. That leads to the quality of education will not be guaranteed.
Finally, the government can not afford to maintain both education and other social problems. They need money to invest in more modern teaching equipment and improve the quality of education better day by day.
To sum up, free education is not wrong. However, we need to be flexible in every problem and apply the right subject so that my country is more and more developed, especially education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...r fun or imitate their friends and they dont know what they really need. That leads ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quality of education better day by day. To sum up, free education is not wrong. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04013377926 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61707769233 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9786864285 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6470588235 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254267587376 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918758326167 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869832012705 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130249662351 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838817924488 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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