There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local Councillor. in your letter
- Introduce yourself
-Explain what the problem is
-Tell the councilor what you would like to be done.
Dear Counsellor,
My name is Shikha Sharma and I am a resident of DN Nagar.I am writing this letter to draw your attention about discomfort we are facing due to the water-logging outside my house.This is causing inconvenience to us and others also.
This time, due to heavy rain,the condition has worsoned.Last year also,I complaint about the same and I was being told that it will get clear this year.But,unfortunately no steps has been taken so far.Moreover,lack of proper drainage system causes lots of float on the roadway.For many days,it remains as it is and no one bothers to carry.This results in a bad odour in the entire vicinity and is a compromise to hygeine.Also,street lights are very poor.Majority of the time,particularly in the night;when needed most,they don't work.This could be dangerous during monsoon especially.
Therefore,I would request you to re-construct the road by keeping above points in mind and provide enough lighting during night. In addition,it will be great if a team can work on improvement of a drainage system.
I solicit your full-co operation.
Yours faithfully,
Shikha Sharma
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...ur full-co operation. Yours faithfully, Shikha Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58570550249 2.54303337028 141% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711111111111 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.422278682 44.8134815571 429% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 76.5299724578 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.0 16.8248392259 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 2.54639175258 982% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129048361085 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813328174684 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479699067526 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081200473772 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423896667493 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 8.37731958763 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.