All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity,
How could it be tackled?
Obesity has become one of the diseases that is affecting adults as well as children across the globe. Life threatening diseases include heart attack,kidney failure,diabetes,hypertension,asthma and so on.All these are one or the other way related with obesity.It has been seen that generally overweight or obese people are more vulnerable to any kind of diseases.What is more alarming that children between the age group 5-10 years are also becoming obese.There are several factors behind this.In this essay,will discuss potential reasons and solutions to overcome or say how a normal human being can tackle this.
First and most important reason behind obesity is food,mainly junk food.Habbit of eating junk food in more frequency gives an invitation to such diseases.For example,it has become a trend now to order food from the restaurants specially during weekends.These meals might be considered cheap,but they are lack in nutritients.They contain more calories and no or very less vitamins that increases fat proportion in the body if eaten regularly.
Second reason is lack of exercise.Exercise keeps body healthy and fit.Regular exercises helps to improve overall health and metabolism of our body.Many health related problems can be cured by doing some physical activities like cycling,walking,jogging,weight lifting etc.
There are many surgical and non-surgical solutions also.The bariatric surgical procedure is one of the example of fighting obesity. obese people now a days go for such solutions as it is very effective settlement.The main thing is an individual should opt for a healthy lifestyle and do exercise regularly to avoid such diseases.Along with adults,if children are also made habituated with a choice of correct healthy food and exercises,obesity can be avoided in children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, kind of, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61172161172 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91954400524 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.720202007 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.333333333 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230844575354 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104755229395 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695126044174 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118361167641 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716532649034 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.88 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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