THE INTERNET IS NOW USED ALL AROUND THE WORLD AS A SOURCE OF INFORMATION AND COMMUNICATION. HOWEVER, ITS CONTENT IS OFTEN CONTROVERSIAL, SO MANY PEOPLE THINK IT NEEDS TO BE CONTROLLED. OTHERS BELIEVE THERE SHOULD BE NO INTERFERENCE WHATSOEVER,
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Nowadays, the internet is considered a great tool for collecting information and communicating but many people believe it should be strictly controlled while others do not. From my viewpoint, though the internet is a place where we can share anything we want and connect everyone together, it should be limited in some areas in order to protect users
On the one hand, the internet is a giant online library where we can find any topic related to our research or studying. It is because everyone is allowed to share their knowledge on websites and forums freely, so we can know more about the world, about something that only a minor number of people know. Moreover, we can use lots of apps and online websites to connect with other people, but if they are controlled by an organization, we might feel unpleasant when someone can access our conversations, which can be led to arguments. For example, Facebook used to be sued for taking private information of users and it was because they could control our accounts for seconds. As a result, the online world should be an open area where everyone has freedom.
On the other hand, the internet is also a risky place, we do not know whether the information is right or not. As we all know, everyone can do anything online, and some bad guys might take advantage of this to take our money and private information. It is clear that nowadays, there are plenty of ways to trick innocent people such as giving a link that contains a virus and offering the victim to give money if they want them to solve the virus… Even more, we can be scammed when buying things online and lost our money. Hence, it is necessary to have some rules and limitations in order to protect our interests
In conclusion, the internet is a wonderful world for us to do research and gather useful information but it also contains some specific problems. Therefore, everyone should know how to protect themselves from being tricked on the internet and only look for the information to consult, not believing in it totally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, the internet is considered a great tool for collecting information an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71229050279 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6223219109 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513966480447 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1924043641 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.363636364 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199593394254 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951116582498 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664495250657 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148060017919 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579073135961 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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