Nowadays, many mothers take care of the family and don’t go out to work. Some believe they should be given salaries by government. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, a majority of women look after their offspring and other family members and are unemployed. Therefore, it is believed by some sections of society that mothers should be paid by the governing authorities. This essay disagrees with this statement because it would put a financial burden on the government, and females can maintain a balance between work and family life.
Firstly, giving salaries to unpaid home-maker workers might prove to be burdensome for the authorities. That is to say, there are many fields in a nation that needs to be developed, and specific funds are allocated to each field in such a way that progress can be made without putting stress on the economy, thus adding an area that requires monetary help from higher authorities would cause an adverse effect on the economy of the nation. A recent survey has shown that adding an extra area to provide wealth by the administration could reduce more than13% of the total development of the country.
Secondly, some ladies are able to maintain well both personal and professional life. In other words, there are certain times in their life, when their children start going to school, women have plenty of time to do work from home, therefore devoting to work 3-4 hours a day can make a huge change in their life. For example, there are many organizations that provide online work to people for certain hours a day, which is enough for workers to fulfill their needs and feel motivated.
On balance, housewives who take care of family and growings buds should not be paid by any executives because it cast an adverse effect on the economic status of the nation and a rapport can be made to handle work and family as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81972789116 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53454315793 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7271320478 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.7 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213539033428 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792879422097 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710026037552 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127730553339 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563650448678 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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