You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to you friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should:
- Say what you enjoyed about the dinner
- Describe how you feel about his/her family
- Invite your friend and his/her family to you place.
Dear Daniel,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to thank you for the happy evening which I spent at your home last Sunday evening. The delicious dishes prepared by your wife tasted the same as those made by my mother and it made me feel nostalgic. Dancing and singing with you and your family made the weekend even more enjoyable for me.
Your little son is so cute, and I was surprised to hear him recite numerous ancient Chinese poems fluently. Your wife was so hospitable and the taste of dinner which she cooked impressed me a lot.
So, when are you coming to stay with me? There is a newly opened hotspot restaurant in my neighbourhood where they serve excellent food and drinks. Why not come and have dinner with me/us in this restaurant next Saturday, as I know hotspot is your favorite dish? On top of that, in the evening of that day, we can attend a music concert hosted in the national stadium which is about 10 minutes’ walk from my home. I know you are stressed out due to work, so attending a concert is an effective way to relieve yourself.
Hoping to see you soon.
Becky
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45853658537 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30723972438 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668292682927 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.706707645 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291602266117 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106238842984 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594306322834 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166956411577 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637211649589 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.