Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In modern society, it is a controversial problem that computers are confirmed to be the most important invention or not to the human race in the last period. I am in consummate accord with the statement that computers have the largest impacts on human life.
Firstly, the benefits contributed by virtual technology cannot be deteriorated in the modern materialistic world. since the demands for more effective work, individuals need to cultivate their knowledge through reading. However this activity requires lots of concentration and regular exposure so for some people, it is relatively inconvenient and struggling to comprehend. Hence, computers' appearance helps people work or study more efficiently in virtue of their fully functional programs. For instance, busy commuters do not need to note their essential information by hand-writing method, instead, they can easily install the apps particularly designed for taking notes or writing.
Otherwise, the progression of computers has a huge benefit on today's social life. For those who live far from their home, the cost for long-distance calls is roughly pricey, and thus using computers is their optimal choice since it is free to chat on some platforms, for instance, Facebook, Instagram. Besides, the functions on some apps that allow people to visualize their conversations by sending images or stickers are also a factor to help to build the computers' preference. A prime example is that people can discuss an argued post with extra stickers to express their emotions.
In conclusion, computers are a life-changing invention in the history of human development. I strongly believe that computers can be the potential assistants for people in both work and entertainment by their effectiveness and convenience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...ated in the modern materialistic world. since the demands for more effective work, in...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...tivate their knowledge through reading. However this activity requires lots of concentr...
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Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
... are also a factor to help to build the computers preference. A prime example is that peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49818181818 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13194999063 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0936295614 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151641508547 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059723717368 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574201938866 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113878897881 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766107166394 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.