Young people occupy a paramount part in societies. they responsible on the futue. The quention is; whether this part of people areinfluntial on their countries, they have no impact on their cultures. This can be explain in many concepts. Admittedly, some persons believe that yougsters pay high attention more to idiols and celebrites like actors or ethltces, In my perspective, youth have a many merits that help them have a huge impact on a crucial decision related to their societies. In the following essay,I will elaborate on acouple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, foremost reason is, imrove in education in these days play important role in development of young knowledge and information. This improvement make them willing to do many researchs and new studies. For example, in Bagdad Uneversity many experts professors who are only 25 years old or little more did a very particular studies do invent way help in reducing of invirnoment polution from elastic bages. they found awy in which they can recycles elastic by using them to pave roads. As we can see how these young people assist in protect our atomspher from elevation of harmful gases like carbon dioxide from burning of these plastic material. Furthermore, they protect ocean speciece life by avoiding throwing plastic in oceans.
In addition, young people are proffesional in using social media. This make let them get a lot of skills and experience in a all part of technology. Even though, they make them easily communicate with the world. yougster always aware what happen in other counteries and they can take abenefits from these events to avoid a negative result in their back home. For instance, in Egypt, Youth figure out that bad presedent will reach them to same resuls that occur in other arabic countries like Iraq. Therefore, young people protested to chage their presedent and they successed. This example illustate to us the big affectiveness of youth in changing polices in their countries.
In conclusion, I do not concur with previous notion, this is based on exposition which are mentioned above. young people more educated and expert with social media. These merits help them to be influential part in their countries.
Young people occupy a paramount part in societies. they responsible on the futue. The quention is; whether this part of people areinfluntial on their countries, they have no impact on their cultures. This can be explain in many concepts. Admittedly, some persons believe that yougsters pay high attention more to idiols and celebrites like actors or ethltces, In my perspective, youth have a many merits that help them have a huge impact on a crucial decision related to their societies. In the following essay,I will elaborate on acouple reasons to explain my point of view.
First, foremost reason is, imrove in education in these days play important role in development of young knowledge and information. This improvement make them willing to do many researchs and new studies. For example, in Bagdad Uneversity many experts professors who are only 25 years old or little more did a very particular studies do invent way help in reducing of invirnoment polution from elastic bages. they found awy in which they can recycles elastic by using them to pave roads. As we can see how these young people assist in protect our atomspher from elevation of harmful gases like carbon dioxide from burning of these plastic material. Furthermore, they protect ocean speciece life by avoiding throwing plastic in oceans.
In addition, young people are provetional in using social media. This make let them get a lot of skills and experience in a all part of technology. Even though, they make them easily communicate with the world. yougster always aware what happen in other counteries and they can take abenefits from these events to avoid a negative result in their back home. For instance, in Egypt, Youth figure out that bad presedent will reach them to same resuls that occur in other arabic countries like Iraq. Therefore, young people protested to chage their presedent and they successed. This example illustate to us the big affectiveness of youth in changing polices in their countries.
In conclusion, I do not concure with previous notion, this is based on exposition which are mentioned above. young people more educated and expert with social media. These merits help them to be influential part in their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07923497268 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68040585215 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6959350448 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426078229005 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125719007164 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117010615829 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262714152493 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15568462245 0.0645574589148 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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