Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or Antarctica.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for people who visit such places.
Now a day's tourists want to try new trilling experience by visiting new places where the difficulty is there. I opine that there are many merits for the citizens who visit such places. This essay will scrutinize the aspect of both the ensuing paragraph.
To begin with, I think the there are plethora of advantage because we will know about the distinct culture of the difficult places, and how the people of that area survive the situations and arrange their quotidian food and income. Furthermore, the tourists also get the thrilling experience and knowledge about the places as they will do research on the local denizens, and get relax by doing the traditional activities in the city. For example, the survey of 2020 elucidates that 25% of people goes to difficult places to taste the food and to learn how to survive in worst situations.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that, we have knowledge about the different language and how to cook food in order to survive the new locations. Similarly, the main drawback about is that the health should be good so that if you have any medical emergency than you can do the treatment with your own. To exemplify, the report of 2019 illustrates that 50% of proponents who visited to the Antarctica have no contact to their families and some families also think they have died in the cold regions as they are capable of hazardous environment.
In conclusion, from an overall perspective without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that the tourists who visit the new locations should do proper research and then go with necessary amenities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85766423358 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65727769097 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5948803224 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.1 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192666764932 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765599094722 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723784690872 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118203533627 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724650975655 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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