Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Regarding the issue of advertisement, some people hold the view that it should be prohibited completely. From my perspective, albeit certain drawbacks, the adverts’ merits are far more significant; thus, it should be permitted to display.
On the one hand, it is beyond doubt that advertisements can derive innumerable benefits for both the businesses and individuals. In terms of customers, advertising popularizes newly launched commodities and gives them the maximum choices of products instead of sticking to one brand. Therefore, buyers can purchase items with more reasonable price and higher quality due to competition among retailers. Turning to conglomerates, adverts have a vital role to play in the economy as it helps boost sales, increase revenue and earn more profits. In fact, adverts that are well-designed with vivid pictures, witty language and content tend to attract more buyers, which evidently can help bolster the company’s image.
On the other hand, adverts can exert numerous devastating impacts. Undeniably, advertisements are now always truthful as companies tend to exaggerate the products’ quality and deliver distorted information in order to gain more public attention. In fact, advertisers mostly aim their market at children who are naive and easily influenced by misleading information so that they can earn more profits since children will put pressure on parents to buy them goods. Moreover, should television programs are interrupted by advertisements, the viewers will by disturbed and annoyed. Clearly, it is extremely nuisant to accept constant interruption passively that spoils the viewing without doing anything.
In conclusion, the benefits brought by advertisements obviously outweigh the disadvantages. It is highly recommended that governments should censor false information or products that are harmful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on parents to buy them goods. Moreover, should television programs are interrupt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77818181818 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19185740894 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665454545455 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5720396474 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110542569383 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388937922519 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441572240271 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771345032815 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496311874542 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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