In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think this is happening?
It is often discussed by the people that why are people migrating from underdeveloped areas to the developed ones. In my opinion, there are numerous factors that are needed to be considered.
The rural states are frequently assumed to be underdeveloped and less populated. For instance, rural villages might lack in the number of opportunities in the various fields. It has been researched that maximum students shift to urban cities for pursuing further education. However, there might be certain reasons behind this, such as, opportunities in particular sector is limited. Likewise, in the modern age, conundrums like internet connectivity, mobile range problems or electricity supply might hinder the progress of workers. Thus, for the purpose of work and education people might move to the cities.
On the other hand, some people might think houses in the rural areas as phlegmatic utopia. For example, it has been recorded that laborers after resignation migrate to a place with equanimity. Although urban cities are densely populated and literacy rate might be high, there might be number of people who have different perspectives. Hence, students or workers move to developed states to extend their boundaries and overcome educational limitations. Moreover, they might return from urban to rural states because of hectic work schedule or dense population of urban area.
Thus, it may be true that the rate of migration from the urban areas is increasing day by day. In my view, issues such as lack of literacy rates or opportunities can be the reason. While, if the amount increases these immigrants might return to their original place to find calmness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28195488722 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82182614802 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8318228619 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209064110468 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706094551536 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814228256289 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137315823305 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581976633547 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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