Do You think Music make us Happier. Discuss about it
Listening to the music has become extremely prevalent over the last few decades, being regarded as a method to release tension after a weary work day. And it is also becoming the habit of many people. This action is thus no surprise that music is today regarded to be the most mainstream entertainment source. But very few individuals recognize that this kind of art has positive effects on their mood and level of happiness. And this essay is going to discuss this topic.
In fact, music benefits so much from health. Music plays a critical role in managing a person's mood, from pain management to stress alleviation. We'll get more positive energy when we feel optimistic and less anxious. We can also accomplish your task with more enthusiasm, which leads to more productivity overall.Moreover, music will motivate us to solve life issues and to overcome them. On the surface, music provides consolation to a person who is recovering from a terrible situation. It also serves as a regulator that assists alleviate the unpleasant mood of a person by unleashing a type of neurochemical dopamine. These neurochemicals play an important part in mood regulation and influence the happiness of a person deeply. In order to ease stress, anxieties and boost your mood, for example, people who cope with a split might take refuge in music.
In summary, I think there are three key reasons why many people regard music as significant. Music provides us with pleasant, soothing moments and shows us how precious our lives are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in fact, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98770491803 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8821093001 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2709045396 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153981381403 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501337283892 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416916801505 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112775730895 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522474610479 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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