Nowadays in many countries, people are following the latest fashion, hairstyles and so on. Is it a positive or a negative development?
Keeping up with trends for appearance has provoked many arguments regarding on its influences. While I agree that this matter of contention can have certain drawbacks, I am more confident about its positive side.
The first good side to mention is that following the latest fashion, hairstyles and so on enhances the national economy. Since people with the tendency of updating fashion trends are likely to have high expenditure on clothes and adornment, they benefit the economy, especially the beauty industry. More than being of great value to the Gross Domestic Product (GDP), fashion trend updating also helps boost individual confidence. One can express himself through fashion. Moreover, by following fashion trends, they are able to show off their ability to of adapting to changes, stepping out of their comfort zones, and keeping up to date with peers. That not only makes them the cool kids getting all of the attention in the room, but also helps them impress others with their dazzling styles. This is likely to become a huge plus point when it comes to job interviews,. As a smartly-dressed stylish candidate probably impresses the employer better has a better chance of getting the employers’ biases than a dowdy one.
On the other hand, chasing the trends of beauty seems to result in some problems that are worth concerning. First of all, it is definitely a waste of money for some people to become fashion slaves. Because not anyone is financially available enough to afford the latest fashion items, which are usually sometimes exorbitant. In the case of luxury famous brands such as LV, Gucci, Prada,.., it could cost one a fortune to own an item from those brands. Not to mention, trends change constantly and rapidly. Following them means you are forced to keep buying new items, even from luxury brands. Secondly, becoming a fashion trend follower could lead to a loss of personal identity, as trendiness is prioritized over suitability. your forget ting who you really are by making you change yourself to fit the trends. In another way of speaking, trends can kill your identity.
In conclusion, as long as it remains in control of our financial ability, we can totally keep pace with fashion and beauty trends to feel confident in front of the crowd as a stylish and chic individual, leading a modern lifestyle. Be selective and make sure you follow the trends that represent who you are. Do not lose your own color to thousands of trends out there. Let beauty be a lifestyle, not an obsession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95294117647 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61830236345 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.534537045 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5217391304 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86956521739 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156301024247 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420121724037 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576902879099 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829460056505 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404691711358 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.