The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this present era, health is the key to achieve success. Nowadays, it is believed that the average life span of an individual health will get affected in the nearer future. In this essay further on, I will elaborate upon ideas in favour of my opinion along with stating a few contradictory views than other in the society might have.
To begin with, due to change in food habits the survival of human being is getting lowered. Nowadays, people are more attracted towards fast food but its consequences are quite hazardous. An enormous use of fast foods can lead to severe heart attacks.For instance, a recent survey published on fast food takers and a hygenic food intaker and the result was interesting as it shows about 70% have one or the other disease.
Additionally, with the increase in population, pollution is also reaching its peak. As we can see , excessive use of vehicles results not only in noise pollution but also results in environment pollution. Moroever, due to deforestration the level of oxygen is also getting lowered and which ultimately affects the individual on the higher note. To illustrate, previously there were not so many accidents , however due to increase in population the accidental ratio increased.
On the other side, most of the people believe that average health state of an individual will remain same in the nearer future due to higher standard of living. People tend to live with all new advancements in their lifes, but forget to take care of their health as they are highly attracted towards junk food.For example, in metropolitian cites, high number of youth attracted towards fast foods.
To conclude, there is a section of society that disagrees about the health issues in the nearer future due to high standard of survival.I, however, completely agrees due to food habits and pollution problem the average health state will get lowered in the upcoming years.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... foods can lead to severe heart attacks.For instance, a recent survey published on ...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is also reaching its peak. As we can see , excessive use of vehicles results not o...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...viously there were not so many accidents , however due to increase in population t...
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Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... are highly attracted towards junk food.For example, in metropolitian cites, high n...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...future due to high standard of survival.I, however, completely agrees due to food...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98746081505 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7048429002 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6118880143 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186132024911 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643512763982 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561581249328 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106763290189 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621229801284 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... foods can lead to severe heart attacks.For instance, a recent survey published on ...
^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is also reaching its peak. As we can see , excessive use of vehicles results not o...
^^
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...viously there were not so many accidents , however due to increase in population t...
^^
Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... are highly attracted towards junk food.For example, in metropolitian cites, high n...
^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...future due to high standard of survival.I, however, completely agrees due to food...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98746081505 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7048429002 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6118880143 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186132024911 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643512763982 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561581249328 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106763290189 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621229801284 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.