Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households.
What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?
No one can deny the fact that all households have produced waste in many countries these days. The scientists said that garbage from normal households had made up more than 60 % of the total garbage over the world. Therefore, the increasing volumes of domestic waste over recent years present a challenge for all of us. There seems to be 3 main problems stemming from this situation , and also 2 steps we could take to tackle it fully.
Possibly, the most important problem is environmental pollution. Household waste comprises many elements ranging from foodstuffs to metal, paper and plastics. When people discharge rubbish directly into the environment without safe recycling remedies , it will profoundly far-reaching devastate both flora and fauna. Global warming, greenhouse effect, flood, drought, water contamination …. are the results of domestic refuse. Secondly, litter is also the culprit damaging people's health by causing various diseases and illnesses : high blood pressure, cancer… In addition, local authorities sometimes struggle to handle the huge question of how to collect, process and dispose of this material . The historical solution has been incineration or landfill, but the problems of expenses which arise have led to discontinuation. This leads to the third concern, which is finance : the high cost of disposing of refuse in an ecologically sound manner.
In terms of possible solutions, probably the most short-term solution would be to raise the level of public standing for recycling wastes instead of throwing these things away. This would reduce the environmental impact of the waste by recycling paper pulping, plastic bags, reusing plastics…. and also celebrate a campaign of education as a long-term solution. A further, longer-term solution might be to divert far more government funds into waste processing and recycling facilities . If reinforced by incentives for consuming less and penalties for excessive waste, it will help protect the community .
Overall, the major problems include the environment, finance and people's health. The possible solutions involve more immediate investment in facilities, and also encouraging long-term changes in household behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6497005988 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96628600078 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673652694611 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0846405616 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3157894737 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273154195675 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069706599591 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599210768368 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157973276441 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252240015664 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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