Some people think that children’s free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?
It is believed that education plays a vital role in a student's life, and since we all live in a world of competitions, parents have been more aware of nurturing their children. Some people believe that activities in freetime must involve education, or else they will waste their time. However, I strongly disagree with this statement, and I believe that students should have the freedom to do what they desire during their extra-time.
To begin with, forcing children to study, even during their breaks, will somehow forcefully put some psychological pressure on them. According to a UNICEF poll performed in 2014, 80 percent of students experienced stress as a result of one reason: they constantly prioritized their studies, even in spare time. As a result, it will be detrimental to students' mental growth. Furthermore, many parents are unable to discern what is best for their children, causing them to believe that their children must learn to succeed later than others, unknowingly increasing the pressure on their children.
Secondly, some parents assume that it is useless for their children to spend their free time chatting with friends. This is completely false, because education inspires learners in numerous ways, and allowing them to meet one another and discuss their feelings and emotions, allowing them to hangout together is one of them. This will develop them in specific areas such as becoming more emotional, more touching, or even enhance skills like team working for example. This is also important for their life further on.
To sum up, despite the fact that training has its own significance, it isn't acceptable that the free time of youngsters changed over into educational exercises as this will somehow increase pressure on their mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... that education plays a vital role in a students life, and since we all live in a world ...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e skills like team working for example. This is also important for their life furthe...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...t training has its own significance, it isnt acceptable that the free time of youngs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66780661734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8641630656 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338619369795 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131576615727 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107149839866 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208735797215 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703450360745 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.