The chart below shows changes in exporting goods in a country in 2009 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart provides data on the alteration of 5 merchandises’ export value in two consecutive years 2009 and 2010 of a nation, measured in billion dollars.
Overall, the revenue from the international trade of equipment, telecommunication, and metals witnessed an upward trend, while the reverse pattern happened to clothing and manufacturing. A notable feature is a rise in total exports.
The most tangible growth but lowest export value belonged to metals with the figure approximately doubled from 2.3 billions dollars to 4.1 billions dollars, which was a dramatic increase of 122%. Telecommunication and equipment also saw a similar movement, comprised approximately 60% and 13% of increasing rates respectively. In more detail, telecommunication, which is one of the staple exports of the nation, reached 12.7 billions dollars from the initial figure of nearly 8 billions dollars and that of equipment leveled up by 1.3 billions dollars from just above 10 billions dollars .
Clothing and manufacturing, however, experienced a mild decline of -17% from 6 billions dollars and -27% to 4 billions dollars respectively. Meanwhile, the overall value of exporting five types of products embraced a consider upward trend by a fifth during the given time from 32 billions dollars.
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... metals witnessed an upward trend, while the reverse pattern happened to clothin...
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...upward trend, while the reverse pattern happened to clothing and manufacturing. ...
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...aple exports of the nation, reached 12.7 billions dollars from the initial figure...
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...lars from just above 10 billions dollars . Clothing and manufacturing, however,...
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... decline of -17% from 6 billions dollars and -27% to 4 billions dollars respectiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5303030303 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37038738478 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2300126653 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.875 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541700000156 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317562293013 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414882873939 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486355871943 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476409800728 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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