More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The demand for outfits, cars, and other products is witnessing an upward trend. This essay will suggest some explanations for this phenomenon and indicate why it is a completely negative development.
There are two principal reasons behind this phenomenon. Initially, the tendency to crave large brand products mostly stems from people’s belief in personal possessions reflecting the wealth and social status. Therefore, possessing extravagant products can help them capture public attention and show off their status. Another possible explanation refers to the quality of the items. This is derived from the fact that when people purchase branded merchandise, they also buy the guarantee that the purchased item lasts long or has excellent customer service. Take iPhones, which are relatively stable, for example. They will still remain updated by Apple for approximately 5 years and can be fixed almost anywhere in the world.
From my perspective, the rising desire for reputable brands is totally detrimental. To begin with, this is now serving as a deterrent to healthy competition among corporations. For instance, the social media market has fallen into the hands of Facebook and TikTok, leaving smaller platforms with negligible support and usage from the public. Moreover, many people lacking money management skills do not take buying these exorbitant products into careful consideration and often make impulsive purchases, which may sink them into financial problems.
In conclusion, people want to own clothes. cars. and other items from well-known brands for the reasons of showing off personal possessions and product quality. My verdict is that this trend has adverse impacts on competition among companies and increases the financial burden on some people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cars
...conclusion, people want to own clothes. cars. and other items from well-known brands...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...sion, people want to own clothes. cars. and other items from well-known brands for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78923316944 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7516649287 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131365566836 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416769104458 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040381688001 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817223293881 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292230446153 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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