Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
An activity like a school project is often assigned to kids not only to assess a child's understanding of a subject but also to gauge his/ analytical skills when given an unknown problem to solve. This has raised the debate since it is used to assess a child's individuality whether it is fit that it needs to be done solo or in a band. This issue will be the main focus and will be concluded with my opinion.
So , doing a project in a group has its own benefits. Firstly it gives a hands-on-experience to work as a single unit, an exercise that can turn foes into friends beacuse there is no " I " in the team , only "we" . They fail and succeed together. In this way , they learn to cooperate, adapt and strategise together . This way friendships deepen and respect is earned amongst teammates. Working in a gang teaches basic leadership skills - if nurtured well can give rise to a towering personality needed to helm tough jobs like that of a CEO. So in way teamwork is a live personality building workshop. While in a bunch, a person gets accustomed to the idea of group discussions , something which they will need in their posterity to ace the qualification rounds of different companies in job recruitments and college admissions. But to be brutally honest , team work often does no justice to each member's creativity as the success of the project is always attributed to the team lead. So the persons who laboured the most overshadow some of the non-performing members of the team.
In a counter- argument to groupism , going solo gives full autonomy to the person for executing the project. He is the auteur of the work.The project bears that stamp of his individuality and cannot be used by anyone else. This level of creative freedom is imperative to bring out the innovation , scientist inside a person- which can be overshadowed while working in the group where the leader or consensus chooses the more convinient solution over innovative one. Working alone can do wonders for a supremely talented person with a rich sense of original creation and these persons are the future Nobel Prize winners. But working alone can be quite stressful , as it is a one-man show. They can certainly use another hand , afterall two hands are better than one.
So in my opinion the evaluation criteria must be the deciding factor for the choice to go solo or segregate into gropups. If focus is on creativity , it is obvious that working alone is the best choice but keeping the future in mind , it is always better to use a squad as two hands are better than one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71840354767 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79525554797 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547671840355 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7128374286 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194023512165 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520146930419 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038995624655 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107214551154 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043457828783 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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