There is no need to complete an education beyond a primary school level. Do you agree or not?
One might argue that it is not necessary to have higher education than primary school grade. This essay disagrees that children just only have to graduate primary school due to the fact that it will lead to a low pay job, a poor life status and easy to be attracted by bad things.
Firstly, if people just have a low education, that will influence their jobs. This is because they do not have enough knowledge about their major and work, and that will make their salary lower than higher education people. For example, in 2009, the Bao Moi reported that more than 90% of companies want their employees to have at least a secondary qualification. Moreover, if people only receive low wages, their quality of lives are likely to be poor. Therefore, by only get the primary school diploma, pupils should participate in a higher education to have a better future
To add further credence to my assertion, I note a negative impact on the children's lifestyle if they were only graduated from primary school level. In my view, since pupils do not have enough education, they will be simply interested in bad things such as smoking, pilfering and alcoholism. In other words, their psychology is not developed enough to understand the harms caused by those things. In Vietnam, more than 50% of juvenile criminals were children who did not graduate from secondary school.
In conclusion, this article opposes the idea that just graduating from primary school is suitable because there are a number of drawbacks that children have to face, like not having a good life condition or having a number of bad attitudes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stand the harms caused by those things. In Vietnam, more than 50% of juvenile crim...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... not graduate from secondary school. In conclusion, this article opposes the id...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87272727273 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54005661419 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1017306433 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127374108265 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523494945811 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561706624418 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086775320624 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272769616995 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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