Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the past decade, when human society was developing, the punishment had been appearing to admonish the horrible behaviors and demonstrate the government system’s power. With the generous, nowadays, clemency people believe that punishment should be not expressed because of the fiendish. However, others encourage capital punishment should be survived to support a better human society. I believe that following this punishment has both advantages as well as serious drawbacks as discussed below.
The abolition of capital punishment demonstrates the benevolence toward criminal people. In the present age, most of society in the world is giving prominence to the benevolence between humans, therefore, death punishment is preventing their prejudice. In addition, the abrogated capital punishment probably gives a new chance for crimes that their penitence is showed when they are damning in the arduous prisons. Furthermore, removing death execution successfully avoids the mistakes of the supreme judge and the investment processes. The abolition of capital punishment effectively contributes to the great human society, moreover, prominence the benevolence of humans.
On the other hand, the death penalty is considered the essential punishment to demonstrate the serious dangerous action as murdering another person, or killing and stealing a patient’s property, etc. With some corroborant peoples, death execution should be kept continuing since its advantages, which can strongly build a better living environment without illegal action. Consequently, it will contribute to a perfect developing society in the world, in addition, and consolidate the power and influence of the government. Moreover, the death penalty is contemplated to remind all generations to avoid doing some illegal actions.
In conclusion, I totally advocate abolishing death execution as the fiendish with the person of the fatal errors. In my opinion, giving another new change with forgiveness is always better than a critical punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...iety was developing, the punishment had been appearing to admonish the horrible behaviors and ...
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Line 1, column 450, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ing this punishment has both advantages as well as serious drawbacks as discussed below. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87162162162 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06767918597 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5293713434 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276599543309 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854767085662 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773274555517 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145815070096 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961070958304 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.