TPO 51 -Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every successful community from the beginning needs to construct on the basis of the rule. Society of future build today and people of future society is today young people. Following rules and obey from laws maybe To look's strict, but acting and following the rules is the guarantor of an advanced and civilized society. Personally, I agree with this statement due to various reasons, two of which I'm going to elaborate upon to substantiate my viewpoint in the following essay.
First and foremost, young people Because of their age in confronting with rules resist. Laws seem tough and people think that by following these laws, their freedom is lost but not only do Laws ensure that the rights of all members of society, including the person who obeys the law, are respected, but also The community is also healthier and life in the community is even better.
Secondly, young people in schools usually do not follow the rules because of the negligence of teachers and at home because of irresponsible parents. Because from the beginning of their lives, young people did not know the reason for the existence of laws. They are also accustomed to not following the rules, when young people enter the community and are forced to follow the rules they think the rules are strict.
In conclusion, having considered the aforementioned points, I firmly believe that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. This is because not only young people Because of their age in confronting with rules resist but also Because, from the beginning of their lives, young people did not know the reason for the existence of laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 281.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92526690391 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49064052643 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455516014235 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1394206463 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357344669376 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154594774528 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806172280388 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241279302494 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668531435508 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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