Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's world, a lot of people prefer to join government jobs for the long - term rather than joining a private company. The government job provides a lot of perks and benefits to its employees which in turn they misuse these benefits. I think the long-term job seekers should do some voluntary work in return for the government benefits which will also benefit something to the community. In the next paragraphs, I will be supporting my statement with examples.
For instance, in government jobs, people get good benefits other than their salaries such as health benefits, provident funds, sick leaves and casual leaves. Along with these benefits, the employees also get certain concessions from the government in purchasing public transport monthly pass, in petrol, in taxes, etc.
As the employees end up saving a good handful amount because of these benefits, they should help the community with some voluntary work. For example, with these benefits, these people can donate some funds from their salary to the NGOs and the organisations that are working for disabled people. They could even help the people staying in rural areas by making them more aware of the benefits they could avail from these organisations for a better living.
In addition, working towards the welfare of the community will also build a healthy relationship with others in society. For example, the teachers who work in the government school can do voluntary teaching to underprivileged children. This small good deed of action can bring awareness to the children and the community who are not aware of the importance of education in today's living. The voluntary teaching will also give a sense to the person of the current situations that the rural community is going through. This teaching will also make a student be a better person in the future and would be able to contribute his share in the society.
To summarize, doing voluntary work in return for the benefits given by the government to its employees will be beneficial for both the individual and the society. On top of that, this kind of avenue of work will bring benefits to the community which will help for the growth of our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99180327869 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64236626971 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478142076503 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6084598185 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.1875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258300386891 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952534133422 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685273552023 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14922127397 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632999364153 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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