In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a%0Ahobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Shopping has been changed a lot in recent years.Earlier,it was seen just as a daily work but it became a hobby in modern era.Many positive trends are there of shopping as a hobby. However, a negative side also cannot be ignored.
On the one hand,individuals who pruse shopping as a hobby may waste their time.Many hours of a day they spend in shopping malls and complexes.This time can be used to learn something new regarding to their study or vocational training which would be beneficial later in life.it has noticed by many surveys that extra time for education becomes student more successful than those Spoiling their time on roads and markets for doing silly activities which include shopping also.Morever, habit of shopping also led to small illegal activities like theft some money from house when parents say no to give money for it.After sometime it can be changed into big crimes.Therefore,shopping should be in limit.
On the other hand,positive aspects of it is also there.Firstly,when people visit outside for shopping than they will find new friends which help them to reduce daily life stress.Secondly,by visiting shopping malls people learn how to behave with different type of people as almost every type of people visit here.To illustrate, people who are going market places and out areas are more cooperative.With these skills person can impress to anyone.As a result of this people will became more successful in their life.
In conclusion,shopping has many merits but demerits overweigh it as I mentioned above paragraph, so there should be limits on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14341085271 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31204895634 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.880771569 49.4020404114 506% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 265.4 106.682146367 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.8 7.06120827912 380% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172467245575 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889806423289 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055980566625 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105425630099 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029980292987 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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