You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to participate in Advance Architectural Design Seminar which is going to be held in Canada. I read about the seminar in an advertisement and would further like to know more details.
Being quite eager to attend this seminar, I have read that it will welcome various speakers from around the world. This seminar will surely help me to boost my career.
As per the advertisement, the date is given 12th October. Could you please inform me of the duration period which would help me to plan my schedule for booking the tickets? Besides, I would like to know in detail about the itinerary since this would help me to prepare priorly for any interactive sessions. As I have never traveled to Canada before, could you further suggest to me accommodation and how much will it cost for the duration? This will help me to budget my expenses. As well as let me know the cost of the event and what all things would be included.
Waiting to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Andrew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld further like to know more details. I am quite eager to attend this as it is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.484375 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55982562849 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.477812227 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245956167582 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876570217517 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777505151548 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128520883663 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110714373421 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.