In many country around the world life expectancy is increasing.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages then give your opinion.
It is a fact that people are expected to live longer on a worldwide scale, which raises alert for potential issues, but brings in benefits at the same time. Whilst I agree with the latter outcome, I opine that the negative side outweighs the opposite one.
On the one hand, there are opinions suggesting that living longer will lead to adverse ramifications. As the life span is stretched, more people live into old age. Covid-19 is a prime example of the exacerbating physical state at this stage of life. The 2-year ongoing contagious pandemic has especially jeopardized the vulnerable aged people, whose immune systems can barely stand the organism. As a matter of fact, it elucidates how fragile and easy-to-be-hurt people are when they get older. Population ageing also results in the nature being overexploited to obtain essential necessaries such as foodstuff, medicine and to create more living space given that it is the key facture leading to overpopulation.
Looking on a brighter side, some point out the major merits of lengthened lifetime. Old people could pass down to the posterity wisdom from ages of living that can shorten the path to success of the younger generation. The life after retirement will no longer be boring if they spend time educating their children what the outside world is like. What is more, some working fields including education, researching or science, … witnessed late-blossoming careers, as some credentials can only be accumulated after practicing for years. Being able to live more will break the lifetime barrier holding them back.
To conclude, after weighing both sides, I’m convinced that the advantages of extended lifetime is outweighed by the disadvantages since the world is altering day by day that some knowledge might soon be behind the time and the expenditure allocated for experienced experts is immense.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...facture leading to overpopulation. Looking on a brighter side, some point o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, such as, as a matter of fact, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22772277228 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86461042317 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660066006601 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3836446443 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701119028949 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236847225412 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028488668418 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480985438706 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241456370014 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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