Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Some people think that the developed nations should share their resources for supporting the poorer nations in terms of hunger and knowledge whereas others contradict stating that the government of the poor nation should facilitate the basic requirements for their citizens. This essay will emphasise more on why the developed nations should aid the under-developed countries for the best interest of humanity.
In the first place, the poorer nations are usually accounted for low GDP income which could not help the community to fulfil their basic needs. Due to the scarcity in income which is leading to corruption in the country, there is a dysfunction in the system. This makes it hard to expect the government to be able to provide the basic requirement of food and education to all its citizens. For example, Columbia has the lowest GDP income in the world. In order to survive, the population follow malpractices in the country like the trading of drugs. Since the public wants to be safe from being captivated by the government, they end up bribing the officials in the bureaucrats.
In contrast to this, the developed countries are quite rich in their assets and do not use them in an efficient way. Hence, the funds of this country are used in a negative way like building armies, making more weapons and nuclear reactors which could be used in wars. Instead of utilizing this capital, they could assist by diverting assets in flourishing the nation and the remaining resources should be passed on to the poorer nations. To state an example, USA is using its money in creating larger armies and bombs for a future war which is unnecessary. Instead, it could use the pending wealth to eradicate famine in Africa.
To conclude, this essay has argued that how developed countries could help the poor countries as humanity by providing them essential amenities for a better society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ich in their assets and do not use them in an efficient way. Hence, the funds of this country are u...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nce, the funds of this country are used in a negative way like building armies, making more weapo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, so, whereas, for example, in contrast, in contrast to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98738170347 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66250541921 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.175238501 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196231860755 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624372145128 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639629317856 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11175079067 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669729811078 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.