Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a positive and negative development?
People have different views of whether the successful pressure of parents has done harm to their children or not. Personally, I tend to suppose that this practice should be considered to be more of a negative trend.
To begin with, there are several rational reasons for the age-old question of why children are under the pressure of their fathers and mothers. A cogent explanation can be found in the feeling of pride of parents; in other words, when their offspring have a good performance at school or obtain jobs which are suitable for their expectation, they will feel happy and confident. In fact, becoming a successful person can help people to have a stable life with good conditions and relationships. Generally speaking, parents pressurize their kids into being successful because they are concerned about their children's future.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe the railroading of parents has negative impacts on the young. Firstly, it is the pressure that makes youngsters discouraged. They have to work or study with an uncomfortable mind, which hinders their jobs from being effective. In addition, they are prone to suffer from some serious psychological illnesses, even autism. Another reason is that pressurizing is able to restrict youngsters’ creativity because they are not allowed to their dream and devote themselves to their passion. Admittedly, this practice has a lot of weak points but it also contributes to the education of children.
In conclusion, although putting pressure on children to succeed seems to be negative, it could be seen as a positive aspect to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2337164751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89836550481 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.131440846 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285413325561 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980719508182 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595047208702 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17367794409 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176802161597 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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