NOWADAYS MANY parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed? What is the reason for doing this? Is this a positive and negative development?
Every successful person was once a child and not all of their parents exert pressure on them during their childhood to accomplish goals. However, some parents did and I think this tendency is somewhat beneficial to some extent but it also comes with a few prominent drawbacks. This essay will illustrate the purpose of putting an enormous amount of pressure on their children and also the bright side as well as the disadvantages of this trend.
First of all, everyone wants to wallow in the ambiance of success at least one time in their life. But some people cannot reach their dreams when they are young, and desperately, they pass them on to their following generation. As a result, some kids are undergoing invisible and tremendous pressure from their parents, it keeps going with them until they finish school, also in some severe cases, until they die or their parents die first.
Clearly , the dark side of this method of parenting is it causes severe damage to their children's dreams. For example, if someone forces their children to be a doctor even though they don’t want to, doing something you are not into is like loving someone you have not met. In addition, if students cannot reach the targets listed by their parents the results are incredibly terrible, their parents will be disappointed about their heirs, who have received a manifold investment from them, both physically and mentally. Last but not least, over-pressure applied by parents could erode the tie between them and their children, and a personal dissatisfaction could escalate into a family-conflict.
On the other hand, children need motivation and encouragement from their parents and peers to achieve their goals and targets. Pressure In some Asian countries including Vietnam, demands from parents are remarkable. Sometimes they create a study path for their kids with the hope that their kids could be successful people in the future. It is without a doubt that specific, clear targets and to-do lists are great ingredients of a recipe for success. Because they could reach their full potential thanks to the hectic schedules directed by their parents
All in all, the benefits and drawbacks of forcing children to succeed have coexisted equally. It all depends on the way parents use their force to keep their children studying and developing their knowledge and skills.
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, at least, for example, i think, in addition, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08717948718 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62229792099 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6819634038 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283316197953 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108251848701 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522163293868 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176008337949 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535138229762 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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