Nowadays congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem to most cities.some people believe it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue.do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be solution,in your opinion?
Lifestyle in cities has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, as traffic jam spreading its roots in every nook and corner of the world, is become a burning issue. some people are of the opine that establishment of broader roads is only a single way to eradicate this flaming issue. Here, I strongly discord with the give statement firmly.
Numerous points can be considered to endorse my point of view.To commence with, increasing in car ownership is the main stumbling block to upsurge the problem of gridlock. To exemptify, in this contemporary epoch, folks have the tendency to use personal vehicle's instead of using public mode of transportation due to dearth of amenities in public transportation. Therefore, it is the primordial duty of regime to stimulate civilians towards public transportation by providing lot of facilities to them. Furthermore, making flyovers is anticipated to be a auspicious approach to vanish the problem of blockage on roads as it can curtail the entry of cars in cities. Besides this, construction of wider road's will promote deforestation which will be perilous for ambience. On the other side, opposite wind is also there.
Initially, establishment of wider road's could be contribute remarkably to alleviate the problem of congestion as broader roads provide ample of space to folks. So , the road accidents could be mitigate to a large extent. Thence, the problem of roadblock and mishappenings on roads will be no longer in existence.
To recapitulate, the construction of wider road's holds Full water to curb the problem of gridlock. However, it is the ist obligation of High authorities to take some proactive steps to nip this worrying concern from the bud.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...f the world, is become a burning issue. some people are of the opine that establishm...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ome a burning issue. some people are of the opine that establishment of broader roads is ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... considered to endorse my point of view.To commence with, increasing in car owners...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e, making flyovers is anticipated to be a auspicious approach to vanish the probl...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oads provide ample of space to folks. So , the road accidents could be mitigate to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07867646168 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5114886433 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265245397864 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754519478436 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457029346523 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145882263938 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00602594122856 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...f the world, is become a burning issue. some people are of the opine that establishm...
^^^^
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ome a burning issue. some people are of the opine that establishment of broader roads is ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... considered to endorse my point of view.To commence with, increasing in car owners...
^^
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e, making flyovers is anticipated to be a auspicious approach to vanish the probl...
^
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oads provide ample of space to folks. So , the road accidents could be mitigate to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07867646168 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5114886433 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265245397864 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754519478436 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457029346523 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145882263938 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00602594122856 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.