The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Cooperation and competition are two different things with varied purposes. The issue states that cooperation is what a society needs to prepare young people for leadership in different fields rather than competition, and I agree with the statement. As cooeperation teaches us to help others selflessly and helps us to grow together in the society. Furthermore, it solves several socio-economic problems and so on, and these actually are the forthright qualites of a leader.
First, when one cooperate with others, he has to be mature and sociable. So it installs social qualities in one self that is needed to be a leader. A leader has to cooperate with many people of many characters. By cooperating with others one develops the quality to help others without expecting any gain which is the quality of a leader who helps his people selflessly.
Similarly, cooperation helps to grow a society together. A leader will grow wtih his allies , his subordinates and his people. Without growing thogether a society cannot achieve great heights. Like the late Bangabandhu Sheikh Mujibur Rahman, who was the fronliner at the time in 1971 to liberate Bangladesh from Pakistan, also helped the nation to grow and tackle post war difficulties. Without cooperation it wouldn't be possible to overcome the post war issues for Bangladesh.
Also, cooperation solves many socio-economic problems which is essential for a nation. Like Child marriages in many Asian countries have been lessen largely because of the continual cooperation between the government and the people of those countries. So, one society cannot prosper or grow without the cooperation between the leaders and the people of that society.
On the other hand, one might say that competition develops winning mentality in oneself which is essential for a leader to go ahead, to defeat the opposition. It will make oneself enthusiastic to improve oneself to win the competition. But, this is flawed as a leader will then attempt illegal measures to win the competition. Also, people will select the leader if they think he has done great works for them and for the development of the society and nation. So, competition doesn't make you a strong leader, what makes is cooperation.
In conclusion, I would like to say that society should install cooperation in young people for making them good and versatile leaders as it teaches to help others impartially, helps to grow together as a society and solves numerous socio-economic problems that wouldn't have been solved without proper cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, then, thus, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21359223301 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93818058645 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483009708738 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.1129504347 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6363636364 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255744278173 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786928101672 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763540709194 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14683081323 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493234041494 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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