Advertisement of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is irrefutable truth that there are plethora of paramount benefits associated with the technology in every sphere of life;however, it also has certain unadoptable impacts. Being influenced of children and their care-takers by the trend of Exaggerated advertisement of toys and snacks and its negative impact has brought too much attention across the world. Hence, I am strongly concord with view point that that administration should have to taken strict action at war footing and ban all unnecessary advertisement .
There are several compelling reasons why these overstated advert should be banned. First demerit is attributed to the wastage of money and pace. Many organizations advertise their product in such a way that their subjects think that they cannot be without it, while it is just their delusion. To quote an instance, a game development organization promotes his newly developed game as an ‘education game’ which will help children to excel in their academic subjects;consequently, parents will buy that game without any doubt. However, soon they will find it useless, ultimately it will waste their wealth and time too. So, these activities should be banned to secure wealth for future use.
Moreover, the second negative is combined to deleterious deleterious health effects on society.
Advertisements for snacks make the public feel that this is delicious and as healthy as home food; however in reality food is full of preservatives which could have harmful effects on the health of individuals. For example, these days , a famous chips company is promoting his newly launched products as healthy and nutrition rich cuisine, but actually the product is full of salt which is not good for health.
To conclude, Although phenomenon of the advertisement is very prominent, it is possible to alleviate this colossal crisis. It is the call for paradigm shift, thus parents and children need to become aware about this trend and the government should have to take significant steps before the situation becomes perilous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35913312693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03222300159 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2798077317 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.642857143 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290046706142 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826648680723 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761888685533 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126656832809 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890302218993 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.